The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their education level.
The vertical charts indicate the information about the weekly earning of the men and women are 16-59 age group according to there education level. The data is calebroted in euros.
At the first glance the below graduates men who are age of 16-19 earn 100 euros. Moving ahead, the below graduates men who age are 20-24, 25-29, and 50-50 earn the 200 euros more then 300 euros, and 500 euros. Furthermore, the graduated men are age of 30-30, 40-49, and 50-50 earn more then 400 euros, again the more then 600 euros for both age group men respectively.
At the second glance, below graduates women age of 16-19 earn 100 euros. Apart fron this, the age group 30-30, 40-49, and 50-59 earn 250 euros, moren then 200 euros, and again 250 euros. Moreover, the graduates women at age of 20-24, 25-29, 40-49,and 50-59 earn 250 euros, and the left all age group women earn 300 euros respectively.
Overall, it is evident that the mens are earn more as compare to women from the both level of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...he first glance the below graduates men who are age of 16-19 earn 100 euros. Moving ahe...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...5-29, and 50-50 earn the 200 euros more then 300 euros, and 500 euros. Furthermore, ...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ge of 30-30, 40-49, and 50-50 earn more then 400 euros, again the more then 600 euro...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...arn more then 400 euros, again the more then 600 euros for both age group men respec...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ros, moren then 200 euros, and again 250 euros. Moreover, the graduates women at ...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...verall, it is evident that the mens are earn more as compare to women from the both ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... is evident that the mens are earn more as compare to women from the both level of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65536723164 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18997801419 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446327683616 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1066916695 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360176854583 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189085580146 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112222823762 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260818562925 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787506907705 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.