The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their education level.
The given bar graphs depict the information about the weekly income earning by graduates and under graduates genders according to their age groups. The data is calibrated in euros.
It can be seen that the maximum males was earned near about 700 euros, and the minimum males had been earned 100 euros. However, the graduates men had been earned near about 400 euros, which was 25-29 age groups. whereas, the non graduates men was earned 350 euros. In addition to this the graduates men had been received 425 euros who was 30-39 year age, but the non graduates men was grossed 400 euros.
As far as trend was concerned the maximum females was earned 300 euros, and the minimum females had been earned 100 euros. Moreever, the graduates women was earned 250 euros in the age of 20-24 whereas, the non-graduates females had been earned 200 euros.
Overall, it is evident that the men had been more earned euros in both categories and women was less earned than men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
... 400 euros, which was 25-29 age groups. whereas, the non graduates men was earned 350 e...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... 400 euros, which was 25-29 age groups. whereas, the non graduates men was earned 350 e...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75147928994 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19836620632 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479289940828 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2886637525 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2222222222 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182353886399 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101936910955 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588551981853 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146674172826 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346378371249 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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