The graphs show average temperature and rainfall in two places in South Africa

Essay topics:

The graphs show average temperature and rainfall in two places in South Africa

The trends of the graphs showing characteristics of the climate somewhat vary between Cape Town and Upington, both are areas in South Africa. The average monthly rainfall in Cape Town increases steadily to peak halfway through the year with the highest recorded in June, from this point onwards the rain starts decreasing to reach its lowest in November whereas in Upington there is a lot more perceptation in general, reaching averages of over 180mm compared to less than a 100 at its best in Cape Town.

Additionally the statistics of rain in Upington looks almost as it is Cape Town's but inversed, being high at the beginning of the year and rising until March when it starts to fall rapidly until July followed by a stable record then starts to rise again in October. Temprature wise, however, there are considerably more similarities. In both areas the heat drops in summer, although it is rather colder in Upington then rises during winter. The overall change however is much more gradual in Cape Town. While it starts to become warmer in Upington from August especially when looking at the maximum temperatures, there is nearly no difference in the weather from June through to August in Cape Town.

Temprature differences are also more extreme in Upnigton throughout the year ranging from 36 at its maximum in winter to as low as 5 degrees at its lowest in summer compared to a range between 27 and 7 in Cape Town.

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Average: 7.4 (5 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...han a 100 at its best in Cape Town. Additionally the statistics of rain in Upington look...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'whereas', 'while', 'in general']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267924528302 0.268076937826 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.120754716981 0.116061578633 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0716981132075 0.0759168565197 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0754716981132 0.0366838410393 206% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0301886792453 0.0131127313244 230% => OK
Prepositions: 0.188679245283 0.155750635184 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0377358490566 0.0379272487307 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61477663055 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0339622641509 0.0210936926555 161% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0867924528302 0.0948980150116 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00754716981132 0.00967000014798 78% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1434.0 1161.00487805 124% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.9 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80566801619 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352226720648 0.337110787985 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255060728745 0.247514529752 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14979757085 0.171178102325 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0728744939271 0.112407865282 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61477663055 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562753036437 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 55.5054418475 49.3433353143 112% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 30.875 23.0094962315 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.9527149956 42.9750493124 228% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.25 135.714022679 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 23.0094962315 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.689975730869 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 56.3810728745 47.7609492067 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.18333333333 2.94281807926 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348456640022 0.418131533498 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139944246982 0.181151798455 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101697709693 0.0850326197045 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.649369113818 0.706616315825 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.243898896973 0.157042692854 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183728101907 0.228904883108 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866167832185 0.108899403657 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.490252368897 0.367819155151 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.083851003549 0.0812612215331 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272118408562 0.316326947829 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068671470747 0.0921553760075 75% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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