Every year several langauges die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

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Every year several langauges die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

Some languages become obsolete every now and then, leaving behind a history of a community that once coined their words to create a means of communication. Usually the public would not turn a lot of attention to such changes. However, for the ancestors of those who spoke the language, that can be accompanied with a sorrowful emotion.

Every language holds in its history a form of identity of the society in which it was developed. The beliefs and aspirations of the culture can be easily felt from the literary works written in that language.

On the other hand, very few people speak a language that is dying, thus the fate. In turn, it appears illogical and impractical to preserve a form of communication that hardly anyone would make use of. In any case, the works of literature and the structure of the language may be preserved in textbooks if scholars are interested in its examination.

Nowadays, the world is becoming more and more connected. Additionally, a form of developing a common language is already rising to the surface out of necessity. Most of the world at present speaks at least two languages, one of which is extremely likely to be English that has been becoming an international language recently. The reason for all of these changes lies in how our life is today. We travel around the world requiring to communicate with people in different countries. Politicians, traders, businessmen, in entirety are desperate without a language that all parties comprehend.

To sum up, the fact that the number of languages spoken is decreasing could only signify developing links among societies leading to co-operation on a wide scale that was never seen throughout the past of our species.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
Some languages become obsolete every now and then, leaving behind a history of a communit...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'at least', 'in any case', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221518987342 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.158227848101 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0632911392405 0.0946595960268 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0569620253165 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0253164556962 0.0437548338989 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145569620253 0.122226691241 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0569620253165 0.0403226058552 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9055222444 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253164556962 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00316455696203 0.00163938923432 193% => OK
Determiners: 0.132911392405 0.0861772015684 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189873417722 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0316455696203 0.011925033212 265% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1715.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9756097561 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351916376307 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278745644599 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216027874564 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149825783972 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9055222444 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 67.5364992865 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1333333333 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6346009948 49.517814964 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.0078977933 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.76315789474 1.69124875643 104% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234947159851 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0702730261505 0.102741220458 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0378357575205 0.0668466124924 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567099377439 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177794831587 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103818213121 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312468064944 0.0742795772207 42% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397803124138 0.324371583561 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0923994758765 0.0638462369009 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155822841233 0.228012699653 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360444969444 0.058150111329 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 1.9629258517 357% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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