he graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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he graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The line graph illustrates changes in the proportion of population aged years and over in USA, Sweden and Japan Between 1940 to 2040 and is measured in percent. Overall it is immediately apparent that Japan the figure of resident up 65 years will probably significant increased in the last year and the amount should become the highest. Despite violent fluctuations both USA and Sweden the weakest of value have been observed in USA and following by Sweden.
Population of more 65 ages since 1940 to 1980 between USA and Sweden, there have similar pattern of around 14 - 15 percent. But over following 40 years, population remained roughly unchanged in USA round 14 %. But in Sweden, Population of humans increased fluctuation. Then, Japan Country stood at 5% in 1940 and from 1960 to 1980 total of population stay constant. In 2000 witnessed a gradual rise in the number of population aged.
Moving in 2020 and 2040, the figure of USA and Sweden should predicted to increase and growth under 25% and which Japan forecasts show than the amount will reached a high of 27%.

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... increase and growth under 25% and which Japan forecasts show than the amount wil...
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...pan forecasts show than the amount will reached a high of 27%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86885245902 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58619134694 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9490079507 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226906283495 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990488084875 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971883410374 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142907082279 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060086330825 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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