he table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district

The given table provides information related to the amount of money generated by a small restaurant in a city center in a particular business district. Overall, it is apparent that the amount of money gained from selling dinner was greater than lunch. On Friday, dinner sales peaked at the highest figure, while the biggest amount of money received by the restaurant from selling lunch was reported on Wednesday. Additionally, the restaurant experienced the lowest sales during the weekend.
To begin with, on average, the restaurant got approximately $2,300 per day from lunch services, except for Saturday and Sunday when the amount of money from selling lunch was less than $2,000. Furthermore, the highest sales were reported on Wednesday and Friday with revenues of $2,595 and $2,500, respectively.
Moving to the dinner, the peak sale was shown on Friday when the number of money resulting from providing dinner services to the customers was about $4,380, followed by Tuesday as the second highest with $3,850. The income from dinner in the remaining three days was between $3,350 and 2,800. Conversely, during the weekend, the restaurant gained the lowest amount of income, $2,900 and $ 2,450, each day.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...verage, the restaurant got approximately ,300 per day from lunch services, except ...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f money from selling lunch was less than ,000. Furthermore, the highest sales were...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on Wednesday and Friday with revenues of ,595 and ,500, respectively. Moving to ...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...day and Friday with revenues of ,595 and ,500, respectively. Moving to the dinne...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nner services to the customers was about ,380, followed by Tuesday as the second h...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed by Tuesday as the second highest with ,850. The income from dinner in the remai...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in the remaining three days was between ,350 and 2,800. Conversely, during the we...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rant gained the lowest amount of income, ,900 and $ 2,450, each day.
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...d the lowest amount of income, ,900 and $ 2,450, each day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, second, while, except for, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16494845361 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61581695773 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3999777555 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142202761671 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714450080505 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751111139616 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101174879091 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799213740446 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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