Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people consider that people should find a way to live in global warming conditions instead of looking for a method to prevent climate change. I personally do not share a similar point of view with the statement because of the consequences led by climate change.
The increasing global temperature has led to global concern because this phenomenon causes grave consequences such as environmental damage which causes unimaginable for human beings. First of all, one of the problems caused by a bad environment is air pollution resulting in an increasing number of health problems. Lung cancer, for instance, is a communicable disease linked with bad air conditions. This illness had caused the casualty of more than 1 million people in recent decades. If people are able to avoid global warming, this deadly consequence may not have occurred and many people are able to enjoy good lives.
Another problem causes by environmental damage is the distinction of sea creatures. Scientists have stated that in recent years more than 5% of fish and other sea living things have disappeared from their habitats. Many scientific findings have found a correlation of this phenomenon with damaging water bodies such as the sea or rivers. If this unnatural occurrence continues, human beings may face grave catastrophes such as a lack of food which leads to humanitarian crises such as global hunger.
To sum up, the idea of finding a way to live in climate change is not a logical solution due to the fact that this unnatural occurrence may lead to a future global crisis in the future. Thus, I believe that people have to look for a suitable solution to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, thus, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 279.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80902531022 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4246024587 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140363702937 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542326221034 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622483809032 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106570617067 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742649265178 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.