helloThe bar chart gives information about the trend in the number of people living in Japan from the year 1950 to 2055. The table illustrates the population of elderly who are older than 65, in millions and their contribution to the total population, in

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helloThe bar chart gives information about the trend in the number of people living in Japan from the year 1950 to 2055. The table illustrates the population of elderly who are older than 65, in millions and their contribution to the total population, in percentage.

Overall, the number of people in Japan increased constantly from 2005 and then dropped significantly from 2005 to 2055. The percentage of old people climbed at a fast rate from 1950 to 2055.

The population in Japan started with only 84.1 million people in the year 1950. From 1950 to 1985, each year, the population climbed up with nearly 5 to 6 millions people and peaked the total of 1921 million in 1985. From 1985 to 2010, the population is still increased but with a smaller trend than in the previous period, 1-2 million each year. In those 50 last years, the number of people decreased significantly and reached 89.9 million in the last year-2055.

Over the decade, the number of old people in Japan increased with the fast trend, began with 4.1 million in 1950, reached 37.2 million in 2035, which are accounted for 4.9% and 20.0% respectively among the total population. This trend followed a small decrease with 0.7 million from 2035 to 2055 but the contribution to the total remains increasing from 34.0% to 41.0% ( from 2035 to 2055 respectively)

Over the decade, the number of old people in Japan increased with the fast trend, began with 4.1 million in 1950, reached 37.2 million in 2035, which are accounted for 4.9% and 20.0% respectively among the total population. This trend followed a small decrease with 0.7 million from 2035 to 2055 but the contribution to the total remains increasing from 34.0% to 41.0% ( from 2035 to 2055 respectively)

The bar chart gives information about the trend in the number of people living in Japan from the year 1950 to 2055. The table illustrates the population of elderly who are older than 65, in millions and their contribution to the total population, in percentage.

Overall, the number of people in Japan increased constantly from 2005 and then dropped significantly from 2005 to 2055. The percentage of old people climbed at a fast rate from 1950 to 2055.

The population in Japan started with only 84.1 million people in the year 1950. From 1950 to 1985, each year, the population climbed up with nearly 5 to 6 millions people and peaked the total of 1921 million in 1985. From 1985 to 2010, the population is still increased but with a smaller trend than in the previous period, 1-2 million each year. In those 50 last years, the number of people decreased significantly and reached 89.9 million in the last year-2055.

Over the decade, the number of old people in Japan increased with the fast trend, began with 4.1 million in 1950, reached 37.2 million in 2035, which are accounted for 4.9% and 20.0% respectively among the total population. This trend followed a small decrease with 0.7 million from 2035 to 2055 but the contribution to the total remains increasing from 34.0% to 41.0% ( from 2035 to 2055 respectively)

Over the decade, the number of old people in Japan increased with the fast trend, began with 4.1 million in 1950, reached 37.2 million in 2035, which are accounted for 4.9% and 20.0% respectively among the total population. This trend followed a small decrease with 0.7 million from 2035 to 2055 but the contribution to the total remains increasing from 34.0% to 41.0% ( from 2035 to 2055 respectively)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 33.7804878049 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 296.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86148648649 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57799934533 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.368243243243 0.547539520022 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.7565153004 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509237051999 0.215688989381 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250807101782 0.103423049105 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143766708264 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.381243688489 0.15604864568 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.276970083483 0.0819641961636 338% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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