The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

The bar chart gives the information about the trend of the number of people living in Japan from the year 1950 to 2055. The table illustrates the population of elderly who is older than 65, in millions and their contribution to the total population, in percentage.

Overall, the number of people in Japan increased constantly from 2005 and then dropped significantly from 2005 to 2055. The percentage of old people climbed with the fast rate from 1950 to 2055.

The population in Japan started with only 84.1 millions people in the year 1950. From 1950 to 1985, each year, the population climbed up with nearly 5 to 6 millions people and peaked the total of 1921 million in 1985. From 1985 to 2010, the population is still increased but with smaller trend than in previous period, 1-2 millions each year. In those 50 last years, the number of people decreased significantly and reached 89.9 million in the last year-2055.

Over the decade, the number of old people in Japan increased with the fast trend, began with 4.1 millions in 1950, reached 37.2 millions in 2035, which are accounted for 4.9% and 20.0% respectively among the total population. This trend followed a small decrease with 0.7 million from 2035 to 2055 but the contribution to the total remains increasing from 34.0% to 41.0% ( from 2035 to 2055 respectively)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l remains increasing from 34.0% to 41.0% from 2035 to 2055 respectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88546255507 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58847968055 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47577092511 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9003579937 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119760057011 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667321403899 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841769122561 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104741612491 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116277355088 0.0819641961636 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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