Hobby
Hobby is one of the most important things we should have in our lives. It is something that you enjoy doing, something that brings relief of the daily grind and allows you to relax. Of all hobbies in the world, I like music the most. For me, music is the best hobby ever. You should look around and you can see that music is everywhere.
I enjoy music and I listen it every single day. There are a lot of different styles of music for you to choose and enjoy. If I am in good mood, I prefer to listen some energy rock music that keep me happy and full of power. If I am tired, I chose some calm, relaxing songs. Music can speak, through music people can express feelings and emotions. When you hear something that looks like you, that you understand it easily, you start to love it. There are several different ways to enjoy music as your hobby. When you discover an artist or musician that you satisfies, it’s clear that you want to collect all of their works. Not only listening to music, a music collection is a great hobby to have, too.
Music is a hobby that has no boundaries. It makes the world smaller. Without music, life would be a mistake
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| 2022-08-29 | Lynna | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...easily, you start to love it. There are several different ways to enjoy music as your hobby. When...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...discover an artist or musician that you satisfies, it’s clear that you want to collect al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3119266055 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1454947875 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573394495413 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2094306702 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.2941176471 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8235294118 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158835248771 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845111394654 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134664322937 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163996197457 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874038479702 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.2329268293 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 11.4140731707 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.