The first pie chart indicates the information about usage of household energy and another pie chart gives corresponding information about greenhouse gas emission in household both cases in Australian.
At the first glance, It is obviously seen that heating with 40 percent is the greatest sector in consumption of household energy. water heating is the next level with 30 percent. also other appliance devote 15 percent of usage of energy. what is more cooling, lightening and refrigeration are less than 10 percent ( 2 , 4 and 7 percent respectively)
In case of greenhouse gas emissions, water heating with 32 percent has the greatest proportion. the next one is other appliances that devote 28 percent of gas emission . in contrast heating has low percentage which is 15 percent and same as consumption energy cooling, lighting have insignificant percentage 3 and 8 percent respectively. furthermore refrigeration is approximately like heating (14 percent)
To Summarize, water heating has a key role in both cases in Australian. also heating is by far the most consumption of energy, but it is less than 20 percent in another case. other appliance after water heating is a contributing factor in gas emission.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...out greenhouse gas emission in household both cases in Australian. At the firs...
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...is the greatest sector in consumption of household energy. water heating is the n...
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...ting is the next level with 30 percent. also other appliance devote 15 percent of us...
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...ting is the next level with 30 percent. also other appliance devote 15 percent of us...
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...e devote 15 percent of usage of energy. what is more cooling, lightening and refrige...
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...d refrigeration are less than 10 percent 2 , 4 and 7 percent respectively In ...
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...ercent 2 , 4 and 7 percent respectively In case of greenhouse gas emissions, wat...
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...s that devote 28 percent of gas emission . in contrast heating has low percentage ...
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...hat devote 28 percent of gas emission . in contrast heating has low percentage whi...
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... devote 28 percent of gas emission . in contrast heating has low percentage which is 15...
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...rast heating has low percentage which is 15 percent and same as consumption ener...
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...rcentage 3 and 8 percent respectively. furthermore refrigeration is approximately like hea...
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...rcentage 3 and 8 percent respectively. furthermore refrigeration is approximately like hea...
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...ke heating 14 percent To Summarize, water heating has a key role in both cas...
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...n both cases in Australian. also heating is by far the most consumption of energy...
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...s less than 20 percent in another case. other appliance after water heating is a cont...
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... a contributing factor in gas emission.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, in contrast, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29896907216 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16341342642 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525773195876 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.6053954217 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.010558461746 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00411354727581 0.103423049105 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0123406418274 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00666393569704 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115422752056 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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