Given are two bar charts comparing UK's graduates and postgraduates who did not choose full-time work in terms of their career choices in the year 2008.
It is clear that four major categories with widely varying degrees are listed in both charts. Also noticeable is the fact that the figures for graduates are approximately ten times higher than that of postgraduates in each category.
According to the first graph, the majority of graduates (29665) chose to engage in advanced studies, compared with 17735 students having part-time work and 16235 students still waiting for employment. Meanwhi...
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