The tables give details about the sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in five different countries during the year 1999 and 2004 in million euros.
Overall, In case of coffee high rate of sales comes from Switzerland in 1999 and United Kingdome in 2004. Whereas, for bananas Switzerland reported the highest sales in both years.
Looking into the details of coffee sales more closely, In the year 1999, 3 million sales happened in Switzerland and it was the country with maximum profit. It showed a double increase in 2004 to 6 million. On the otherhand, UK noticed the greatest change with 20 millions of sales in 2004 compared to 1.5 million in 1999. Remaining countries Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden witnessed sales ranging from 0.8 to 2 million in both years.
Moving on to the sales descriptions of banana, In both 1999 and 2004 Switzerland observed the largest sales of 15 and 47 million respectively. Eventhough, UK showed great interest in coffee sales, banana sales remains at lower levels. Belgium, Sweden and Denmark showed 0.6 to 4 million sales in 1999 and 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...nd, UK noticed the greatest change with 20 millions of sales in 2004 compared to 1.5 million i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9781420765 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57202381765 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3970929004 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365001213363 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167703763881 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133521968238 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283011096737 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156100232078 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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