The illustration shows how the chocolate produce. Summarized the information and make comparison where possible.
The flow chart below provides information about how chocolate develop in liquid form by raw seeds grown on trees.
If we summarized whole chocolate making process, its ten step process from which first five steps are agricultural and farmer handle, one step transportation and last four points describes the industrial processing to fluid like chocolate.
The coco trees cultivate in South America, Africa and Indonesia which bear coco fruit on ripening converted into red pods. These coco seeds remove from plants and harvest to remove outer covering for finding white cocoa beans. Next step to fermentation of beans and after ferment them dried in sunlight to dry moisture, which help it prevent from degradation. After that storage of beans occurs in large sacks store. All these initial processes are farmer responsibility before transporting to factories in large trucks and lorry.
From now onward industrial part of making chocolate starts. In factory bean roasted at 350 degree which convert into beans brown from white. Then roasted beans put into crusher where crushing occurs and outer shell removed. And inner softer part pressed and liquefied form of chocolate produce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The flow chart below provides information about how ch...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prevents'?
Suggestion: prevents
...sunlight to dry moisture, which help it prevent from degradation. After that storage of...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...which help it prevent from degradation. After that storage of beans occurs in large s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52475518503 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700534759358 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6024520689 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107068305307 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395543278877 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492351135619 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751252763987 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04822241835 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.