The illustration shows information about how igloo is built from snow

Essay topics:

The illustration shows information about how igloo is built from snow.

The diagram illustrates the instruction of buildings an igloo from the snow.

Overall, there are five main stages in the process, beginning by choosing an area covered by hard-packed snow and finishing by covering the hole with snow blocks. In addition, there is little equipment involved as the whole process is carried out by hand.

First, people use the snow saw to cut hard-packed snow into individual blocks, with the ideal measures are 3, 8 and 15 inches for each dimension, and the long blocks are preferred for the foundation of the igloo. Next, the edges of the blocks are then smoothed before being placed in a circle upward style. At this stage, a hole is dug under the wall to make an entrance, and a slightly oversize block was filled in the last opening on the top of the igloo.

In step 4, loose snow is shoveled onto the igloo and packed into all crevices while the inside surface of the igloo is smoothed by hand. Any extra snow is shoveled out if remaining. Finally, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance and it then covered with snow blocks do complete the igloo.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57868020305 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40899180491 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9446697561 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202108360927 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936542062756 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884525534099 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157854685522 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970416528348 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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