the images below explains the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain.
summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The given images illustrates that how various types of pollutants in modern life becomes the reason for acid rain and then affects our global environment and the food chains.
As we can see from the images that how much responsible are our housing society, transport facilities, factories and power stations to generate air pollution by eliminating carbon dioxide, sulphur dioxide, nitrogen oxides, mercury and other compounds in air.
After that, the pollutants rise to clouds and it then crosses over countries and continents. Then these clouds turns to acid rain fall in many countries as they are laden with pollutants.
It can be clearly seen in images that these acid rainfall disturbs trees and plants to grow and how it enters the food chains through hills, lakes and rivers.
To conclude, it can be depicted from the given images that how air pollution disturbs our natural environment and affects the food chains.
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| 2022-02-28 | HappyCandy | 61 | view |
- some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the internet and that governments should provide this access for free other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services discuss both 84
- the images below explains the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53083477409 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1476228843 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289200408184 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142527991193 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813532625134 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160436627876 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078563085623 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.