Information about rail transport in four countries in 2007
The tabel given bellow illustrates the information about rail transportation in four states in 2007. It can be seen that Japan was the top state which used rail transport with the highest amount of passenger kilometers per head of population and saw the biggest load cargo carried. Whereas, USA was the smallest country which utilized rail transport with the most little passenger kilometres per head of population and cargo that be able carried
regarding to the data, the large population people utilised rail transport in USA, reach 27. Whereas less from people in UK and Italy used that, 5.9 for UK and 5.5 for Italy. One others countries, USA had the most a bit people who utilised rail transport, less than 1. While amount of passenger kilometers per head of population 1980 people in Japan registered the largest population used rail transport. Followed by 780 population in Italy and 770 in UK. And USA had the lowest passanger, only 80 per head of population
In the other hand, the biggest cargo carried by tail transport was around 23,01 in Japan and the second big for 22,2 in UK. Succeed by 21,9 cargo carried in Italy. While US was the smallest state cargo carrier by rail transport. There was equality between the highest amount of passenger kilometres per head of population with top of total of people used rail transportation in Japan. Like that similarity between amount of cargo carried with total of passenger utilised rail transport in each country
- Some people believe that children leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are complete waste of time 73
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective and at worst the may be dangerous 67
- In some contries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies 78
- US spending patterns between 1996 and 1996 78
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regarding
...ation and cargo that be able carried regarding to the data, the large population peopl...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o utilised rail transport, less than 1. While amount of passenger kilometers per head...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Succeed by 21,9 cargo carried in Italy. While US was the smallest state cargo carrier...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93172690763 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60096518989 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453815261044 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3370653963 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279239415738 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12354674328 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138613137617 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204999781599 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971891632698 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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