UK Graduate and postgraduate student who did not go to into full time work did after leaving collge in 2008

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UK Graduate and postgraduate student who did not go to into full time work did after leaving collge in 2008

The bar chart given below illustrates Uk graduate and postgraduate scholar who did not fit into full time job after passed university in 2008. It can be seen that the biggest direction of UK graduate continued studied and that was too registered as one of top destination of UK postgraduate scholar. Whereas the smallest aim of both occupation as a volunteer

Regarding to the data, the most increase UK graduate scholar after passes college arround 29.665 people decided further study. There was insignificant contrast between amount of UK graduate scholar for part time work attain 17.735 and who become unemployment was slightly, approximately 16.235. While to do voluntary job was minimally only 3.500 scholar

In the another hand, those were similarity on the top choice UK graduate and postgraduate scholar will done, 2.725 student elected continue study. There was small different for student who taken part time job arround 210 student. And the unemployment obtain three of top destination who choosed by 1.625 UK postgraduates. The quantity of postgraduates in UK was lower than graduate UK scholar, but their decision to elected job in each work has so similarity

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2019-06-19 Brian Sahar 89 view

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...stgraduate scholar who did not fit into full time job after passed university in 2008. It...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...tween amount of UK graduate scholar for part time work attain 17.735 and who become unemp...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent was slightly, approximately 16.235. While to do voluntary job was minimally only ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
... graduate and postgraduate scholar will done, 2.725 student elected continue study. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...s small different for student who taken part time job arround 210 student. And the unempl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...ent who taken part time job arround 210 student. And the unemployment obtain three of t...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24338624339 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90261676172 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624338624339 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9046146541 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333218341395 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155157072409 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104310990681 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234007319734 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816673213293 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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