The information below gives details about household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013.
The table shows the information of revenue of an average family of a city in the UK how they spent on food and clothing in 2 years (2010 and 2013). This essay is to analyze the main feature of the given table.
Overall, UK citizens tended to increase their food and clothes spending while their income decreased. In 2010, nearly half of total household income was used in food and clothes ($14,000). In contrast, the cost for food and clothes grew slightly at $15,000.
In term of the bar chart, the cost on food and drinks in 2010 tied with that in 2013 at 18%. In contrast, there was a downtrend in spending on clothes. In 2010, clothes were the second aspect that UK people spent on. In 22% of the totally money the people earned was for clothes in 2010. This ratio of money was dramatically dropped twice at 12% which accounted for the smallest aspect among things UK households used money for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d and clothes grew slightly at 5,000. In term of the bar chart, the cost on food...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in 2010 tied with that in 2013 at 18%. In contrast, there was a downtrend in spen...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...was a downtrend in spending on clothes. In 2010, clothes were the second aspect th...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... second aspect that UK people spent on. In 22% of the totally money the people ear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, while, as for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45731707317 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22509182079 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.309899373 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348635199274 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133666359423 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108584325792 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247437676576 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064591924033 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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