International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages
It is true that travelling overseas has become more common these days. While there are some advantages of this trend, I would argue that its disadvantages are more significant.
On the one hand, there are some drawbacks of travelling abroad. Firstly, language barriers can be an issue for some travelers. This tend to put them in jeopardy why they have to deal with health problems or society ‘s vices. Take Viet Nam as an example, tourists might need to pay more than local individuals for the same products, because they do not know Vietnamese language. Secondly, smuggling is likely to become a dangerous problem in some countries as a result of the development of international travel. Illegal commodity such as drug and guns can be delivered to other nations and seriously threaten innocent people life.
On the other hand, I would argue that these drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits. Firstly, many people are able to have memory holidays with their family, or friends in other nations. They have chances to experience famous tourist attractions such as Empire state building or Time square, and make friends with local people. Secondly, a number of countries may receive many benefits from global guests coming to visit. It contributes to the tax system and has a profound effect on business activities related to tourism. Therefore, the growth of tourism industry paves the way for economic growth.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential benefits of global travel are more significant than the negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11067193676 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70149934386 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 106.607317073 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7827473489 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 5.23603664747 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180108139015 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524492921142 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550873092437 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102368699082 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410438919761 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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