Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In these day, illness and disease have become a serious problem in some parts of the world. While I accept that there are many remedies suggested to tackle this issue, I also believe that decreasing environmental and housing problems should be the prior action of the governments.
On the one hand, the governments should focus on alleviating the effects of environmental contamination on public health. A high rate of people in some countries suffer from lung cancer and throat cancer because the seriously level of exhaust emissions releasing from traffic and industry activities impair the air quality. For example, in Viet Nam, there are millions of death tolls every year due to air pollution. As a result, the government have been doing some methods to solve this issue, especially increasing taxes on fuel to reduce the number of vehicles travelling on the street.
On the other hand, decreasing housing problems seems as an effective way to prevent illness and disease. It is obvious that many people who have no shelter to live may have a weak resistance to disease. In addition, for those people living below the poverty line, they find it hard to access to medical services. This can increase the risk of infection of people by the virus which can put a number of individuals in jeopardy. Therefore, the governments should offer incentives to ameliorate the negative impact of the shortage of housing. For instance, a part of public purse should be allocated to build social apartments for vagrant people in order to prevent illness and disease.
In addition, in my opinion to tackle health deterioration problems in some nations, the governments should take actions to declining environmental pollution and the lack of housing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
In these day, illness and disease have become a seri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1013986014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80076041245 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9423418067 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261234722325 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824913210917 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460754400764 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145528753344 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285614067038 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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