Dear Sania,
Hope you're doing well.I'm extremely glad that we both got an opportunity to spend quality time together after a long run.
I want to say you a big thanks since the way you and your family greeted me during my stay at your home was heart touching. Moreover, I feel myself rejuvenated and motivated after conversating with you because I had been suffering from stress owing to my job.
By the way, I forgot my wrist watch there perhaps in your room perhaps on the study table before laying on the bed. It is black in colour and new model of Apple. It works on artificial intelligence due to which my regime is controlled by it from Dawn to Dusk.
I must tell you that I can't live without it not even for a couple of seconds, so if you can spare some time, courier it as soon as possible. Apart from this, you can hand over it to my office colleagues Rania who lives few miles away from your city and travels to my hometown on regular basis.
Speak to you soon.
Yourrs affectionately,
Priyanshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sania, Hope youre doing well.Im extremely glad ...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Sania, Hope youre doing well.Im extremely glad that we bo...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Im
Dear Sania, Hope youre doing well.Im extremely glad that we both got an oppo...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sania, Hope youre doing well.Im extremely glad that we both got an oppo...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...y table before laying on the bed. It is black in colour and new model of Apple. It works on art...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... It works on artificial intelligence due to which my regime is controlled by it f...
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Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...Dawn to Dusk. I must tell you that I cant live without it not even for a couple o...
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Line 13, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to you soon. Yourrs affectionately, Priyanshi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, i feel, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45212765957 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43039708969 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712765957447 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5686589886 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26599405635 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917102092841 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902791178819 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10560702729 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08897952003 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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