In some countries average weight of people is increasing and their levels of Health and Fitness are decreasing .What do you think are the causes of this problem? and what can be done to solve this problem?
Health is a crucial aspect to lead a beautiful life ,but in few nations weight of masses is being escalated which has been leading to decline in the fitness and health levels. This essay will highlights the possible reasons for this issue and also suggest financial measures which can be taken to overcome it.
The foremost reason for this concern is that individuals have adopted a sedentary lifestyle, since they do not involve in physical activities such as yoga or other exercises. In other words people work for maximum hours so that they can buy all the luxuries, and in this way they overlook their health .For instance, as per survey by University 50% of the human suffering from one or other physical ailments because they work day and night to earn large amount of money. Apart from this in modern time fast food including Pizzas and burgers have become more prevalent whereas homemade food has lose its importance .The reason being human do not want to waste their time in cooking, and readymade food is considered delicious too Consequently, majority of the masses are becoming a b because food available in the market usually contain enough oil, and thus put detrimental effects on health ,or make person caught by diseases like obesity and diabetes.
Probing towards solutions , Government can create awareness among citizens through media ranging from Television to radio ,or by arranging seminars based on prominence of health related activities, and ill effects of eating outside eatables .Eventually, public will become conscious about their fitness. To illustrate, residents in developed countries have been living healthy lifestyles since last two decades owing to initiatives taken by the governing bodies .Secondly, human beings themselves should be conscious and should follow proper balanced diet chart so that they can take enough nutrients like carbohydrates fats minerals vitamins et cetera.
To conclude, although large population of some countries have become unhealthy, by adopting certain measures including exercises and awareness this issue can be mitigated completely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, apart from, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33933933934 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65050395481 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645645645646 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.003409038 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.25 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.625 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.125 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190829634163 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866227785508 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323163317505 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121939410254 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347851819817 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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