Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to get enrollment in a short term course which was advertised in the local newspaper last week.
Actually, it is Child Psychology course for duration of fortnight and one can attend it anytime as per ownconvenience. It is basically course for teachers so that they become able to tackle the students of different mindsets which in turn would be helpful to maintain discipline in the classroom.
As far as my previous knowledge is concerned,during my internship program I learnt some aspects related to psychology. Apart from this, I learnt about it while pursuing Bachelor of Education degree as well, however ,not in detail.
I would like to take admission in my in your Institute since it is renowned owing to best instructors and teaching facilities. Moreover, I can access to the institute within a couple of minutes after my work because it is just at walking distance from my home.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Maria Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , during
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lor of Education degree as well, however ,not in detail. I would like to take a...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...ur Institute since it is renowned owing to best instructors and teaching facilities. Mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02339181287 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97126670638 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5179700571 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188500529826 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627140382043 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362874281281 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083218823832 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040328282332 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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