The bar chart illustrates level of air pollutions in six countries, three countries in North hemisphere (The US, The UK and Austria) and two countries in South hemisphere (Australia and New Zealand). Units are measured in millions of tones (MT).
Overall, it is clearly seen that the highest volume of air pollutions is in the USA while people in New Zealand can breath the least polluted air from all compared countries. Both compared European countries are polluted the same.
In terms of North hemisphere, the USA has not only the most polluted air than any other country in the North hemisphere, but in general it is the most air polluted country (80 MT). Countries in Europe have more polluted air than their counterparts in the South hemisphere, however, compare to the USA, amount of air pollutions halved (40 MT each).
As for the South hemisphere, people there can breathe the least polluted air. Australia as well as New Zealand showed almost the same number of pollutions ( about 35 MT and 30 MT respectively).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...the USA while people in New Zealand can breath the least polluted air from all compare...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nly the most polluted air than any other country in the North hemisphere, but in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wed almost the same number of pollutions about 35 MT and 30 MT respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, while, as for, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90751445087 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71165427918 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8000880281 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431224279934 0.215688989381 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199837930712 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108825270024 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270802956419 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076307446916 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.