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The line graph illustrates the proportion of household that owned no car, one car and two or more cars in UK from 1961 to 2001
Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend in the percentage of families have one car and two or more cars, while the opposite was true for household without car over a 40-year period.
In 1961, nearly 70% of families in the UK did not have a car of their own, compared to about one a third had one car, and no families own two or more cars. However, the proportion of British had one car and two or more cars rose significantly over the next 20 years, reaching 50% and around 15% respectively in 1981. By contrast, the figure for household without car decreased considerably by approximately 40% in the same time.
Looking in the details, a gradual decline in the percentage of car was seen in the families have one cars, a fall of roughly 5% from 1981 to 2001. Likewise, during the same period, the proportion of families had not car continued to decrease slightly to under 30%. In contrast, the figure for families had one cars rose significantly by about 15% at the end of period.
- Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved 84
- Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. 84
- Line charts 11
- Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, so as to reduce the crime rate.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, look, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47342995169 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60426354577 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9851296158 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0321260744578 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119369723429 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292394913137 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374945744739 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649425079969 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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