Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live, while others believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion?
It is argued that government should take steps to change citizens’ lifestyle. While, some people intend that everybody should have responsibilities for their choice in the life, I believe in the positive regulation the local authorities ushers in.
On the one hand, living your own life has a variety of positive in individual’s life sector. A first noticeable point is that once people can do what they like, they will work more effectively. To explain, when individuals find their passion in workplace, they will devote full of energies to the companies, thereby boosting economic development. Furthermore, being able to choose a lifestyle that is suitable to yourself will reduce stress and enhance people’ healthy. For example, some individuals play sport to improve their body strength, while others maintain weigh by engaging in a healthy diet. Even those these kinds of activities may have negative effects such as being injured or becoming too skinny.
On the other hand, merits of choose their own way to live cannot overshadow the vital role of the intervention of the state. The primary reason is that by enacting laws regard to control societies, the government can lead country through economic crisis. For instance, after becoming independent country, Singapore authority offered many regulations to develop such as one family just had one offspring or asked people to live together in houses built by the government, as a result, Singapore has become a world financial centre. In addition, with their responsibility, the state should encourage citizens to raise their awareness of society. To illustrate, government should make residents to be involved in social activities to connect people together or local authorities can mitigate people who smoking in a public area by punishing them strictly. Therefore, it can prevent people from serious diseases in the future.
In conclusion, while there are strong arguments that personal decision has more benefit, I believe that government always gives appropriate choices for their residents.
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- line chart 73
- line chart 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45962732919 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96576534006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8244910342 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275019982753 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798790832672 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431598183914 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15499689972 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377741748163 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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