The line chart above compares waste output in tonnes among 3 companies A, B and C from 2000 to 2005.It can be seen from the graph that both companies A and B witnessed the downward trend of waste output over 15-year period). In contrast, the amount of was

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The line chart above compares waste output in tonnes among 3 companies A, B and C from 2000 to 2005.
It can be seen from the graph that both companies A and B witnessed the downward trend of waste output over 15-year period). In contrast, the amount of waste of company C increased rapidly.
In 2000, company C produced 4 tonnes while companies A and B only created an average of around 12 tonnes and 8 tonnes respectively). Over the next 5 years company B reached a peak of 10tonnes and company C rose slightly 2 while company A fell significantly to approximate 11 tonnes by 2005.
From 2005 to 2015, the waste of company A and B went down sharply whereas company C went up steadily. In particular, the figure of waste for company A decreased from 9 tonnes by 2010 to 8 tonnes by 2015. Meanwhile, company B plunged from 7 tonnes in 2010 to 3 tonnes in 2015. It is clear to see that, from having the highest waste products index, company A became into the one that had second smallest amounts and the company waste least products is probably B. In contrast, company C produced the largest waste by 2015.

The line chart above compares waste output in tonnes among 3 companies A, B and C from 2000 to 2005.
It can be seen from the graph that both companies A and B witnessed the downward trend of waste output over 15-year period). In contrast, the amount of waste of company C increased rapidly.
In 2000, company C produced 4 tonnes while companies A and B only created an average of around 12 tonnes and 8 tonnes respectively). Over the next 5 years company B reached a peak of 10tonnes and company C rose slightly 2 while company A fell significantly to approximate 11 tonnes by 2005.
From 2005 to 2015, the waste of company A and B went down sharply whereas company C went up steadily. In particular, the figure of waste for company A decreased from 9 tonnes by 2010 to 8 tonnes by 2015. Meanwhile, company B plunged from 7 tonnes in 2010 to 3 tonnes in 2015. It is clear to see that, from having the highest waste products index, company A became into the one that had second smallest amounts and the company waste least products is probably B. In contrast, company C produced the largest waste by 2015.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The line chart above compares waste output in tonnes a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, while, in contrast, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4362745098 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60546017472 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7800206292 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.616851909745 0.215688989381 286% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.296912936588 0.103423049105 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182361098001 0.0843802449381 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.469241151979 0.15604864568 301% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19453794645 0.0819641961636 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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