the line chart bellow shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
The results of an observation on what made people relocate to the capital city of a particular country expressed as a line chart which illustrates four reasons for the moves.
Initially the main reason was employment which the figure was about 2.4 and 6 times more than what showed for study and family/friends, respectively. In 2000, family/friends caused the same number of relocation as adventure which was the least. For first 10 years period all reasons raised but not all of them raised gradually. Employment and study experimented a dramatic raise until 2005 and then the numbers rose steadily. But during the last 5 years period in contrary to study which had a sharply raise again, and family/friends and adventure which continue their gradual raise, employment get a steadily fall and figured equal to study in 2015. Family/friends and adventure never even reach the lowest number of people who moved to city by study which was about 25000, in 2000.
overall, the most grow in number of people during the 15 years period was about 60000 which stands for study, but employment was the main reason for movement since 2000. Family/friends and adventure placed in third and fourth place of importance for people move respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat showed for study and family/friends, respectively. In 2000, family/friends ca...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('sharply') instead an adjective, or a noun ('raise') instead of another adjective.
...s period in contrary to study which had a sharply raise again, and family/friends and adventure...
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('fall') instead of another adjective.
...nue their gradual raise, employment get a steadily fall and figured equal to study in 2015. Fam...
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Line 5, column 692, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Family/friends and adventure never even reach the lowest number of people who ...
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Line 5, column 710, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d adventure never even reach the lowest number of people who moved to city by s...
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Line 5, column 732, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reach the lowest number of people who moved to city by study which was about 2...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...dy which was about 25000, in 2000. overall, the most grow in number of people duri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08292682927 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83090785126 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2618471272 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.777777778 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143401289685 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696645531589 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896038876877 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148460687417 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110456753254 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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