The line chart conveys the proportion of viewers watching Channer one news several times counted in millions

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The line chart conveys the proportion of viewers watching Channer one news several times, counted in millions.

The line chart conveys the proportion of viewers watching Channer one news several times, counted in millions.

In general, most people watch Channel one at 6 pm, which reflects the prime time of Channel one news. However, only a small number of audiences watch TV beyond midnight.

In the first eight months, those who watch tv at 9.30 decrease by almost a half after experiencing volatility, while no significant changes are seen among viewers of the 1 pm show. Also, a dramatic jump in audience numbers is recorded in the show at 11 pm, which takes up more than 4 million people. In contrast, the program aired at 9.30 am plunges drastically by more than 3 million views after reaching its peak at almost 4 million.

In the remaining four months, the audience of the 9.30 pm show improves by 3 million, surpassing the viewers at 11 pm, which plummets dramatically at the end of the month. Although no marked rise is shown, the prime time of Channel one remains at 6 pm, which recorded the highest audience. The number of people watching tv at 1 pm experiences no changes at the end of the period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...time of Channel one news. However, only a small number of audiences watch TV beyond midnight. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66836734694 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6041158193 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4204217304 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276618799772 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145778811273 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21333986495 0.0843802449381 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270745144208 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.271592463888 0.0819641961636 331% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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