The line charts show the amount of beer sold to pubs and supermarkets over six years, where a bar graph displays the amount of pubs closed over the same period.
Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph delineates the volume of beer traded with pubs and supermarkets, while the bar charts present information about the number of pubs that were shut down from 2000 to 2016 in the United Kingdom.
As an overall trend, the beer sold to pubs followed a downward trend, while beer sold to supermarkets followed an upward trend with minor fluctuations. Also, the number of pubs gradually declined in the UK over the given period.
Categorically speaking, nearly 24000 barrels of beer were sold in the base year 2000 and the volume slowly dropped and bottomed out at 12000 barrels in the ultimate year 2016. Similarly, there were 60000 pubs in the UK in 2000 and 2002. However, the total number of pubs in 2016 dropped to 50,000 as 10,000 pubs were shut down from 2004 to 2016. As far as the amount of beer supplied to the supermarkets is concerned, initially, 11,000 barrels were sold in 2000 and the volume slightly climbed to 14,000 barrels in 2004 and remained constant till 2008. After which, the volume dropped to 12,000 barrels in 2012 and the amount of beer sold to the supermarkets surpassed the volume of beer sold to pubs in the pen-ultimate year and nearly 14000 gallons were supplied in 2016, which is greater than the beer supplied to pubs in the UK.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4549270186 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448888888889 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8443582188 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230987952002 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112481079226 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044393376777 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164135622773 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00576672864647 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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