The line charts show the amount of beer sold to pubs and supermarkets over six years, where a bar graph displays the amount of pubs closed over the same period.
Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the number of beers selling in the UK in pubs and the supermarket from 2000 to 2016, while the bar chart shows the number of the pubs working in the UK at the same period. Overall, the selling statistics for the pubs decreased, while it increased for the supermarkets. Meanwhile, number of the pubs declined over this period. The following paragraph are going to explain the major features in detail. At the first glace to the graph, initial amount of beer sell in the pubs was a bit below 25000, whereas share of the supermarket was a mere near 20000. However, in 2014, they both reach the same amount of sell, and then the supermarkets outstripped the pubs in sold beers number so that the difference between the latter and the former reach 1000 in 2016.
On the other hand, number of the pubs working in 2000 was 60000, then the number started to decrease gradually, and in 2010 reached 55000. At last, the trend continued and dropped to 5000 in 2016. Finally, it is inferred that dropping in number of pubs and their share of sold beers existed, whereas there was significant increase in share of beer sell for the supermarket in whole period.`
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, then, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64423076923 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4925183909 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9108030709 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246867754999 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104977947 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729346223663 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193038786998 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897998305785 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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