The line graph gives information on quantity of coffee exported from countries namely Brazil, Columbia and costa Rica for ten years(2002 -2012).
To commence with Brazil and Columbia had an inclined trend in contrast Costa Rica had an declined Trend till 2006. After 2006 Costa Rica had seamlessly uplift, whereas the other two countries had fluctuations. To be in brief Brazil had sequential grow up trend , after 2006 in not more than 2 years it had an noticeable climb from 15 to 20 billions , in 2008 the trend gradually declined to 16 billons and finally in 2012 the trend jumped to 25 billion. Same as that of Brazil, Columbia had an significant improvement till 2006, downfall started and reached to around 2 after that till 2008 to 2010 and then finally it had a significant climb in trend with 15billion. on the other hand Costa Rica had declined trend from 2002 to 2006, in later years the trend improved gradually and reached 20 billions in 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s namely Brazil, Columbia and costa Rica for ten years2002 -2012. To commence ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...clined trend in contrast Costa Rica had an declined Trend till 2006. After 2006 Co...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'uplifted'.
Suggestion: uplifted
...6. After 2006 Costa Rica had seamlessly uplift, whereas the other two countries had fl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rief Brazil had sequential grow up trend , after 2006 in not more than 2 years it ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...er 2006 in not more than 2 years it had an noticeable climb from 15 to 20 billions...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... noticeable climb from 15 to 20 billions , in 2008 the trend gradually declined to...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n. Same as that of Brazil, Columbia had an significant improvement till 2006, down...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...nificant climb in trend with 15billion. on the other hand Costa Rica had declined ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, whereas, in brief, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76506024096 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53109208726 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8067756595 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.23603664747 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119995036369 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085025512581 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110055252526 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185275067827 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132629772258 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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