The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The provided line graph shows the figures for tourists per month to three different museums in London from June to September in 2013.
In general, all three museums experienced a downward trend over the period of four months, while the British Museum ranked first, Science Museum was the lowest in the number of visitors.
Between June and July, the number of people who visited British Museum rose substantially from 600000 to 700000. However, Science and Natural History Museum underwent significant decrease to nearly 350000 visitors. The number of visitors to National History Museum remained at the similar level until August and started to rise gradually peaking at over 450000 people in September.
After July, there was a sharp reduction in the number of visitors to British Museum before increasing again to about 650000 in September. The number of tourist to Science Museum continued to drop to 300000 in August followed by a considerably growth to nearly 450000 in September.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('considerably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...to drop to 300000 in August followed by a considerably growth to nearly 450000 in September. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54066254747 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1443608606 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210967745398 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10037074706 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537920319051 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135816976839 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461340422805 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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