The given line graph represents the information about how many numbers of people visits the three different london museums in 2013 from june to september.
In the month of june, the visitors to the british musuem have taken a steady growth until july and suddenly fell down in the next month. During august and september the visitors increased slightly. On the other hand, the growth of visitors for science museum was slightly decreased until and taken a rose in september. As the same way, at the begining of june the visitors for the natural history museum gradually decreased until july and remained steady till august and increased in september.
British musuem started in the month of june with 600 visitors and in september the count became around 650 people and in the science musuem the growth starts with 400 and ends with 450. Whereas, the amount of people visited natural history musuem in the month of june is 550 people and ends with around 470 in september. Approximately, there was 50 visitors increased by september except to the natural history musuem.
Overall, its seems that the british museum was the highest one comparing to science musuem and natural history musuem for the people who visited in every month in summer. Moreover, there was a difference in amount of people usually visits to the different musuem over 100 people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...ph represents the information about how many number of people visits the three different lo...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...the visitors to the british musuem have took a steady growth until july and suddenly...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...owth starts with 400 and ends with 450. whereas, the amount of people visited natural h...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...xcept to the natural history musuem. overall, its seems that the british museum was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95614035088 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38588428656 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460526315789 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9924316584 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151290976782 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752930908269 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876159368372 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12579131161 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12011853063 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.