The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
Given is a line graph illustrating the quanlity of fast food including Pizza, Fish and Chips and Hamburgers that young adults consumed in Australia over the period 25 years since 1975.
In general, it is evident that the data on Pizza and Hamburgers increased. Besides, the figure for Fish and Chips experienced a reverse trend.
Concerning Fish and chips, at the beginning of the period, the times that teenagers eaten aforementioned food was highest, at 100 times before dropping to nearly 80 times. In next 5 years, the data grew steadily tp approximately 100% but it reduced dramatically for the rest of the period.
By contrast, Pizza and Hamburgers just consumed bellow 20 times in the first years. However, in next 10 years, there was a significant rise to 40 times and over 80 times in the figure for pizza and Hamburgers, respectively. In 1995 the data on Hamburgers went up slightly to 100 times and the number remained the same until 2000. Regarding pizza, the data chimed rapidly to over 80% in 1995 and it unchanged at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, regarding, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81420765027 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7345563955 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0482449298 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949815522989 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373935657003 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614579452875 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682339836251 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779803814649 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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