The given chart depicts the proportion of travelers visiting several Scottish attractions, including aquarium, castle, zoo and festival over a period of 30 years, starting from 1980.
It is evident that an increase was recorded in the data for castle and zoo as opposed to that for aquarium and festival. Additionally, castle held the largest percentage at the end of the period.
In the year 1980, festival was the most favorable choice of tourists with roughly 30%, followed by around 23% of castle, 20% of aquarium and 10% of zoo. Over the next 5 years, the rate for castle and zoo followed the same rising pattern with nearly 3% and 5% respectively. From 1985 to 2000, the ratio of tourists choosing zoo witnessed a fluctuation before recovering to just under 25% at the end of the period. Meanwhile, that of castle underwent a significant shift from approximately 45% to just above 35% and leveled off.
Starting at 30% in 1980, the proportion of attendees at festivals experienced a constant drop and reached its trough in 2010. In the meantime, that of aquarium gained sharply from 20% to 35% before plummeting to 20% in 1990. Throughout the rest of the timespan, it drop steadily and ended up at the rock bottom of the diagram.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drops'?
Suggestion: drops
...Throughout the rest of the timespan, it drop steadily and ended up at the rock botto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82629107981 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75399237109 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6567618548 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0259471435869 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.011358492848 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.014447725828 0.0843802449381 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0172822456337 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100205937319 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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