The line graph below shows the quantity of wheat exports from 1985 to 1990

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The line graph below shows the quantity of wheat exports from 1985 to 1990.

The graph illustrates the amount of wheat which was exported in three regions namely Australia, Canada, European Community between 1985 and 1990.

In general, there was a gradual growth in the amount of wheat exports in European Community and a gradual drop in that of Australia, while in Canada there was a wild fluctuation over a 5-year period. However, the amount of wheat exports in European Community was the highest at the end of the period.

Starting as the biggest wheat exporter, the quantity of wheat exported decreased slightly before rising dramatically and reached the peak of 25 million of tonnes in 1988. A rapid fall was witnessed in the next year, which followed by a minimal climb to its starting point at 20 million of tonnes.

In 1985, European Community was the second wheat exporter followed by Australia. The amount of wheat exported in European Community declined slightly until it rose again before remaining the same at 15 million of tonnes which was 10 million lower than that of Canada in 1988. Two years later, a gradual increase was experienced in the amount of wheat exports in European Community where it hit a peak of 20 million of tonnes. In contrast, there was a steady drop in the amount of wheat exports in Australia over the researched period as it reached a lowest point of roughly10 million of tonnes in 1990.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85775862069 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57831770845 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426724137931 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6695401231 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.222222222 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200656506542 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116958545969 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694814498334 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153446605642 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561383693265 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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