The line graph compares the changes in UK birth rate of women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008

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The line graph compares the changes in UK birth rate of women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008.

The line graph compares the differences in the birth proportion of females in Britain within six various age brackets over a 35-year period.
It is clear that the trends for all age groups experienced decline except for women in their thirties.Notably, the UK fertility rate of females in 25-29 years old had a fluctuation and came out on top regarding their fertility rate.
Between 1973 and 2008, the birth rate of women aged 25-29 started out at 140, which was the highest rate of six age groups. After that, this figure had some oscillations for the next several years and ended up at roughly 120%. By contrast, the statistics of 30-35 and 35-39 age groups descended to around 82% and 62% respectively at the end of the period.
Meanwhile,for women aged 20-25, the number of births declined rapidly to roughly 90 per 1000 people . Similarly, there was a gradual drop in the statistics of under 20 year olds, at 40 per 1000 people . Finally, The age of 40 and over figures were by far the least during the period, with figures below 20% each year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nder 20 year olds, at 40 per 1000 people . Finally, The age of 40 and over figures...
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..., with figures below 20% each year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, regarding, similarly, so, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71891891892 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60266890737 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8319727664 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27952712541 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11244501943 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101724722779 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166802073878 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635160104193 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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