The given line chart compares the quantity of students from three different countries, namely Iran, Greece and Turkey, who enrolled at Sheffield University during a four-year period from 2005.
Overall, the numbers of international enrollment from Iran and Turkey witnessed an upward trend, while the trend of that from Greece was downward.
To begin with, started with the lowest number at only 40 people in 2005, the figure for Iranian students rose slightly in a year later, then levelled off at the number of around 70 students during the next 2 years. However, the figure saw a significant fall by 30 students in the year 2009. Meanwhile, that of Turkish students showed a sharp growth from 20 to nearly 90 students in the first half of the given period, continued to increased gradually in the next 2 years in the rest period, and ended up with 120 students in 2009.
On the other hand, from the highest figure recorded, at 180, the number of Greek students enrolled at Sheffield University dropped drastically and reached its low at 70 students in the year 2007. However, the figure started to saw a steady rise to 80 students between 2007 and 2008, followed up by a rocket jump to 160 students in 2009.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79047619048 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51767448397 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1157150643 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.714285714 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230130539224 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112833855013 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525989131871 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139435768918 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590225839113 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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