The given bar chart depicts how deep snow was in a Canadian ski resort in a 3-year period. Units are measured in cm.
Overall, there was a vast divergence between the depth of snow in 3 months, Nov, Dec, Jan and the other 3 months, namely, Feb, Mar and Apr. Snow was much more shallow in the first 3 months.
To begin with, the snow depth in november witnessed a slight fluctuation of around 100cm during the given period. Meanwhile, the figure for december was 130cm in year one, dropped significantly to 80cm in year two then upsurged to 150cm in the final year. That of january saw a similar trend to that of december, only with a bit higher figures.
On the other hand, there was a steady decline in the snow depth in february and march for the duration, from about 450cm to 350cm. Whereas in april, snow was deepest in year two, most shallow in year 3, at 475cm and 300cm respectively.
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- In order to be successful in sport some people think you have to be physically strong Others say that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33412816057 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5765884561 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236616944545 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094724383605 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513206119444 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148444701882 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550967112916 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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