The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The line graph gives information about how many patients visited four department in a hospital between 2010 and 2016.
Overall, it is clear that the number of patients visiting four departments increased over the period except for Brith control clinics. In 2010, the highest number of patients visit Brith control clinic. However, the figure for patients visit Eye clinic was the highest in 2016.
Look at the figure for patient in 2010 who visits to Birth control was the highest nearly 250. Besides that, the number of patient visits to Eye was 120 the second highest. In 2012, the number of patients came to Eye rose to 150 and continued to increase significantly by 200 in 2016. By contrast, the number of patients visits to Birth control fluctuated over the period and stood at 240 in 2016.
In 2010, the number of patients who went to Dental was 100, higher than diabetic. The figure for people who came to Dental decreased to approximately 50 in 2012. However, from 2012 to 2014 the number of patients visited to Dental rose to approximately 120, but the number of patients who went to Dental saw a grew slightly at 130 in 2016. From 2010 to 2014, the figure for people who visited Diabetic rose by 30. Then in 2016 the number of patients to Diabetic grew to 170, higher than Dental.
- The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016 67
- The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002 67
- The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, second, then, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69298245614 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39693684691 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434210526316 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9986192976 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3076923077 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398699774168 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176214529103 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905290684186 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286315368078 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667318892247 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.