The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.
The table gives information about the money spent on advert of four car manufactories in the England in 2002.
Overall, it is clear that all car manufactories spent much money for TV advert. On the order hand, they almost do not like to spent money for cinema advert. Moreover, the radio advert consumes the same money for all manufactories.
The best type of advert Renault and Rover had chosen that was TV. Renault spent 59 million dollars for TV while Rover spent 45 million dollars. The second choose of them is Press advert. Renault spent 45 million dollars for press while Rover was 38 million dollars. They have the same think when using Radio for adverting, they spent 15 million dollars for radio advert. With Outdoor, they spent a small money with 7 million dollars for Renault and 2 million dollars for Rover. Rover think cinema is not possible so they were not spent money for it while Renault think it impossible so they spent 6 million dollars for cinema advert.
With Vauxhaull and Cetirizine, they have the same idea with Renault and Rover. They spent too much money for TV advert. But the second choose, they believe that radio can make them more benefit so they define spent money for it with 15 million dollars. Certirizine spent 12 million dollars more than Vauxhaull with 8 million dollars for press advert. The opposite, Vauxhaull spent 7 million dollars for outdoor advert more than Certirizine with 3 million dollars. They thought that cinema can not make them benefit so Vauxhaull just spent 5 million dollars for it while Certirizine did not spent any dollars for it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'small money'.
Suggestion: small money
... radio advert. With Outdoor, they spent a small money with 7 million dollars for Renault and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 590, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...ollars for it while Certirizine did not spent any dollars for it.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81454545455 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30125801025 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.374545454545 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0239961932 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8823529412 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0226843318815 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0162600549205 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537101071351 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621060811096 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949401869737 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'small money'.
Suggestion: small money
... radio advert. With Outdoor, they spent a small money with 7 million dollars for Renault and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 590, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...ollars for it while Certirizine did not spent any dollars for it.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81454545455 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30125801025 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.374545454545 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0239961932 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8823529412 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0226843318815 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0162600549205 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537101071351 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621060811096 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949401869737 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.