The line graph shows the average temperature during the hottest part of the day Australia in 2007.
The line graph illustrates changes of median temperature during hottest day of different seasons in 2007 in 5 cities in Australia.
Overall, it is clear to say that, temperature in these cities in Australia ranged from about 15 degrees Celsius to approximately 34 degrees at the average and those figures are measures in hottest days in year.
Darwin is the most scorching city which the highest temperature in summer reached the peak of 34 degrees. And this city also was notable that the fall in temperature between summer and autumn was only one degree, which was the smallest change in temperature between seasons of any cities that year. Cairns and Perth were the next warmest cities shown, although Perth has colder winter than Cairns, with the lowest temperature fell to 19 degrees.
Sydney and Adelaide had similar temperatures in summer and autumn, but the figures of Adelaide fell below Sydney to become the coldest place in 5 cities illustrated, at 15 degrees Celsius. Sydney, Adelaide and Perth had almost same temperature in spring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'during the hottest'.
Suggestion: during the hottest
...lustrates changes of median temperature during hottest day of different seasons in 2007 in 5 c...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the hottest'.
Suggestion: in the hottest
... average and those figures are measures in hottest days in year. Darwin is the most sco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09826589595 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63025470901 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4709043801 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237107703262 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125536446696 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152231275848 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192669045731 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173477154622 0.0819641961636 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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