The line graph provides information about the expected sales in millions of Dirhams for gold in Dubai in 2002 .
A glance at graph reveals the fact that, the trend was fluctuated over the period of time, but march month had a noticeable estimated sales of 350 million. The trend commenced with 200 in Jan, with sequential growth of 250 in Feb., the trend drastically increased from 250 to 350 in Mar . As is presented , the trend rapidly declined from 350 to 250 in April, from then the trend gradually declined to 120 by July. The estimated Sales climbed up in August with an estimated sales of 200, but suddenly the trend fallen down to 120. In Oct the trend improved gradually to 180 , the trend plateaued till Nov , but in Dec their is barely noticeable growth in estimated sales.
Overall, the estimated sales trend had lots of fluctuations. Interest thing to be noted is the estimated sales is , the estimation at the end is same as that of start of year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he expected sales in millions of Dirhams for gold in Dubai in 2002 . A glance...
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...ed sales is , the estimation at the end is same as that of start of year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66081871345 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55030776805 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2380925374 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257238882638 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133349227552 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135743411463 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241678375251 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146671970763 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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