The information about the Dubai Gold Sales is depicted by the rendered line chart. The data has been calibrated in millions of Dhirams in year 2002.
To begin with, in first month of the year Gold was sailed 200 million Dhirams in January. After that there was noticed a small increase in next month it was 225 millions. While in March there was a dramatic increase observed in Gold sales it was 350 millions. Nevertheless, in Dubai Gold sales from March to July in the amount of Dhirams was showing a down-ward trend.
Furthermore, there was a small incline in July to August it was around 120 millions and after that in next month reached approximately 200 million Dhirams. Nonetheless, in next month it was started again in declining and observed around 100 million. In October there was noticed a little increase in Dhirams it was arrived approximately 200 million. While in November it was show a gradually trend at 130 million. After that in the last month of the year there was observed a small increase around 200 million.
overall, after analyzing the data it can be clearly seen that Dubai Gold sales in year 2002 had show many trend such as Growing-up and growing-down trends and there are some fluctuations in millions of Dhirams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... sailed 200 million Dhirams in January. After that there was noticed a small increase...
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...ease in next month it was 225 millions. While in March there was a dramatic increase ...
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... was arrived approximately 200 million. While in November it was show a gradually tre...
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Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('trend') instead of another adjective.
... million. While in November it was show a gradually trend at 130 million. After that in the last ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... show a gradually trend at 130 million. After that in the last month of the year ther...
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Suggestion: Overall
... small increase around 200 million. overall, after analyzing the data it can be cle...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'showed', 'shown'.
Suggestion: showed; shown
... that Dubai Gold sales in year 2002 had show many trend such as Growing-up and growi...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trend seems to be countable; consider using: 'many trends'.
Suggestion: many trends
... Dubai Gold sales in year 2002 had show many trend such as Growing-up and growing-down tre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7962962963 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61183336478 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449074074074 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5523563001 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244146934272 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113405041592 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633454689433 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193362472924 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833984868353 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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