Many individuals argue that nowadays computers and sell phones are using mostly by Young people for communication. This trend has negative effects on people's writing and reading skills. I agree with the statement. I will discuss it in coming paragraphs.
To begin with, there is a one of the most important merit of online gadgets. First and foremost, nowadays mostly masses use their phones for coummunicate with their relatives and friends. To elaborate, during
the busy schedule some individual use phones for chats to relaxing and move their mind stress. To cite an example, mostly people during their job and do work whole day after this working process they feel tired
because of during their free time ther use mobile phones for fun.
on the contrary, there are some demerits of mobile phones and computers. Primarily, lot of youngsters has edicted with online gadgets during the technology advances. To clarify, they use online platforms their
whole day for communication with other people and spend more time on sell phones because of this trendaffects on their reading skills and writing skills. To illustrate, a survey was conducted by education Department in this survey they found that because of mobile phones mostly students ignores their study and use mobile phones all day.
Furthermore, one of the most problem is that mostly people addicted with mobile phones and using whole day online apps in their mobile phones for communicate with others. To elaborate, they feel excitement for chats with friends use most of the time mobile phones and ignore their study because of after some time they have less with writing and reading skills because they have not much experince about study skills. For example during the modern era mostly individuals have not many reading and writing skills because they spend most of their time on online media platforms rather than their study subjects.
To encapsulate it, according to me mobile phones and computers usage increasing day by day because people faces many problems and ignore their study, During this trend they have not skills about reading and writing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, for example, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18208092486 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40820133288 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439306358382 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0221116237 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282955799161 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116146436267 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779936770628 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15729508567 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704835505102 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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