The line graph compares the yield of four coffee shops in New York over last year.
Overall, it is obviously seen that the Tea Room had the most significant income over the period of 10 months; while Càfe Cool, in contrast, took the lowest income at the same time.
In January, The Tea Room was by far the most successful shop, earning about 160000 dollar and the Internet Express was the second with 100000 dollar. The Wifi Càfe and Cafe Cool just got approximately from 40000 to 60000 dollar. Just two months later, The Tea Room got the highest income of itselt, with about 178000 dollar.
At the next period of time, from March to December, something changed considerably. There was a dramatically decrease in the yield of the Tea Room, from 180000 dollar down to about 55000 dollar, reducing up to 69,4%. The Wifi Cafe reached it highest number of income, about 190000 dollar; besides, the café cool and internet express both rose significantly to 120000 dollar and 100000 dollar in the December respectively.
- The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people Discuss and give an opinion 56
- The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year 78
- The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...t successful shop, earning about 160000 dollar and the Internet Express was the second...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...rnet Express was the second with 100000 dollar. The Wifi Càfe and Cafe Cool just got a...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...t got approximately from 40000 to 60000 dollar. Just two months later, The Tea Room go...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...est income of itselt, with about 178000 dollar. At the next period of time, from Ma...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ith about 178000 dollar. At the next period of time, from March to December, something chan...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...mething changed considerably. There was a dramatically decrease in the yield of the Tea Room, from 1800...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... the yield of the Tea Room, from 180000 dollar down to about 55000 dollar, reducing up...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... from 180000 dollar down to about 55000 dollar, reducing up to 69,4%. The Wifi Cafe re...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the highest'.
Suggestion: it the highest
...cing up to 69,4%. The Wifi Cafe reached it highest number of income, about 190000 dollar; ...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... highest number of income, about 190000 dollar; besides, the café cool and internet ex...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...press both rose significantly to 120000 dollar and 100000 dollar in the December respe...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...gnificantly to 120000 dollar and 100000 dollar in the December respectively.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86285714286 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38877647787 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8059766843 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170761697518 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948315494874 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17039611814 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173893973618 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212192617302 0.0819641961636 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.