The line graph shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.
The plotted line graph illustrates that the number of foreigners travelled to Australia in the given period while the table describes that the number of persons from six countries ( South Korea, Japan, China, USA, Britain and Europe) explored Australia in 1975 and 2005.
Overall, there had been a significant surge in the strength of people who had been to Australia over the period.
The line graph entitles that 10 million people drew to Australia in 1975. Then, the figure sharply increased by 5 million in 1985, which further dramatically rose to almost 25 million in 1995. In 2005, a similar trend was observed with an enhancement of 6 million in the figure.
While regarding the table, the highest escalation in the figure of Japanese fir their visit to Australia was almost four times in 2005 as compared to 3.2 million in 1975. Similarly, the strength of tourists from the other five countries was remarkably soared by three times in the 30 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the number of persons from six countries South Korea, Japan, China, USA, Britain ...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a, Japan, China, USA, Britain and Europe explored Australia in 1975 and 2005. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, similarly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98148148148 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54863528935 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.642815759 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169748366609 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072541229174 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749198187383 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977609778136 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754241801266 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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